Friday, September 14, 2012

My Brother Disappearing by a Witch

In room 13 we are pretending to make our big brother, sister or who else disappear. Why you ask? Well we are doing this because, we read a book about the witches. Our teacher Miss King asked if we could write a fake story of how a witch can make a member, in your family disappear.

Creeping towards my big brothers room, I heard something. I quickly jumped out of bed. Walking up to my door, my body had been hid behind the door. I peeked through the little hole. “ It’s a witch”.... I gasped. “ What is she doing. Is she taking my big brother away... Cause if she is, I am glad”. I whispered.

The witch took him away... I followed. It was silent all around. “ Turn this boy into a chicken”. I heard the witch say. “ OH NO”.... I exclaimed. She has turned my big brother into a chicken. My mouth laughed a bit. It was a bit mean. It was the next morning. “ Mary we are having roasted chicken tonight”. My mum said. My big brother was in our freezer because, that creepy witch had turned my brother into a chicken.

Finally it was night time..... My mother took the chicken out of the freezer and then put him into the oven. “ I can’t believe we are going to eat my brother”... I exclaimed in my head. Dinner was ready. I took his leg first....... My dad was eating the leg as well. He said, “ This chicken tastes like Lynx spray. He spat it out. “ Plah, Plah”. With extra spit.... “ What is in this thing”. I laughed.

That was the end of my Brother. Will he be the last one to disappear in my family??????

Wednesday, September 12, 2012

Richard Withehead

listen to ‘Mary's 50 word story’ on Audioboo

Jumping in the air, I celebrated by waving my Great Britain Flag. When finishing my 100m race, the crowd was so proud of me, because I have prosthetic legs. I Richard Whitehead represent Britain. I am excited because I did well. At the Paralympics, I had a great smile. YAY!!!!!!!

Monday, September 10, 2012

Tommy Kapai Wilson

Did you know that if you make 10 people smile a day, then you will have a happy life. Tommy Kapai Wilson, came to our school to tell us special things. Tommy is a real famous guy. Cool.

Tommy taught us 5 LESSONS, and they are......
1. Make 10 people smile a day
2. War and Violence are Dumb
3. Learn how to Forgive
4. Everybody is born with a Gift
There you have it, all the LESSONS Tommy Kapai Wilson taught Pt England.

Did you know that Tommy Wilson has worked for famous people, like the Crown Prince. COOL....  While Tommy was working for the Prince they all had to call him, “ Yes your Royalness”. But after two weeks guess what Tommy got to call the Prince? Bro. Two weeks later Tommy could call him mate.

The Crown Prince bought Tommy a Ferrari..... MEAN... I thought he was lucky. To me I think that Tommy Kapai Wilson has had a life journey. He is so clever. Tommy got that Ferrari from the Crown Prince, because he made him smile everyday.

Rich people have got everything, but in life they got nothing. Love and happiness is all that is important. Tommy Kapai Wilson is a Childrens book Author. Tommy Wilson is fun and cool.

Tuesday, September 4, 2012

Re- Crafting Aldora's Writing

Today we practiced re-crafting a piece of writing. The first paragraph belongs to Aldora, and the second is mine.

Aldora’s Writing

“yeah” I said happily to myself. I was nearly there. I sprinted to the finish line and  made myself happy. I had a drink and then I had a rest. Looking down at my pretty purple and black shoes, it was all muddy and yucky.

Mary’s Writing
“Yay”, I sang proudly to myself. I was so ecstatic that I had crossed the finish line. As I walked passed the drinking fountain, I had a drink then sat down. Looking at my shoes, they were covered with thick mud. We all felt exhausted.
Aldora’s Cross Country Recount

Monday, September 3, 2012