Tuesday, October 23, 2012

The Story About The Beach

My mum called out, “Who wants to go to the beach”. We all replied back, “ WE DO”!!!!!! “ I can’t wait till we get there”. I said to my mum. We packed some lunch then left. “ Finally we’re leaving. It took you guys long enough”. My big sister exclaimed.

“ Yay we made it. We finally made it”. After getting changed, I ran towards the beach. I jumped onto the rocks, I almost slipped but no. With a big splash I was gone. I had an half an hour swim. It was so incredible, but no one wanted to join me because, the water was too cold. It was lunch time. “ I’m starving”. My cousin Xavier had finished before me. He ran to the beach.

Xavier quickly hopped onto the rocks. He accidently landed with his feet in the puddle,                     then Xavier slipped. “ Oh no!!!!! Mum, mum. Xavier fell”. We all ran down to the rocks. “ Are you alright”. My sister exclaimed. “ No, I think I broke my back”. “Quickly call an ambulance”. My mother shouted in a very panicked way.

The ambulance came and took Xavier to the Hospital. Me and my mum had to go with him. I didn’t recognized we were at the Hospital. They ran him into the room. Xavier was tossed onto this bed. He had to have surgery.

Xavier was was gonna be okay, he just had a very very serious back injury. Today wasn’t the day it turned out to be.

Friday, October 19, 2012


With my big sister dressed like a clown, and I a ninja, we finally made it around the neighbourhood on Halloween. While walking, she snatched the bucket of lollies off me. “ Hey!! Give that back”. I yelled aggressively. “ No. I took you Trick or Treating”. She exclaimed. Mum walked into the room. She growled us and took the lollies away. “ You are never going Trick or Treating again”. Mum said madly.

Tuesday, October 16, 2012

The story about Josh

This narrative is about a boy named Josh. He lives in America, and his country had flooded. When it rains the flood rises. It is threatening. Josh was so naughty, he sneaked outside without his mum knowing.

While his nana was moving furniture to higher ground, with his mother. Josh had thought of making a bet for him to jump into the flood, to see if he could touch the bottom. So he went and made his bet.

With a huge SPLASH!!!!! He had disappeared. “Josh.....  Josh”. Shouted his mother. “ Oh Josh where are you”. She kept shouting. Josh’s friends were starting to get worried. “ He’s been down there for quite a while”. Jason exclaimed. “ I’m going down to get him”. Jason said.

By then Josh had hit his head on a building and had sunk. Jason was just in time to catch him before he hit the rock. Josh was sent to Hospital with his Mum. In the end Josh had a serious head injury.

He was lucky to have had his mother there to help him. Poor old Josh. Jason is a hero.

Monday, October 15, 2012